When I moved to Mérida
by Maria Antonia Aguilar Ramírez
One thing that has really changed in my life is when I moved to Mérida in August 2010 to go to the university. I was excited because there was a new experience. But it wasn´t good, my mother and me didn´t have a house and my father was living in a small town named Buctzots, near the city. First week, we were alone because my father returned to his work, we didn´t know anyone and all things were different, Mérida was bigger than Celaya, people speak strange, spicy food didn´t like us and we missed my brothers.
Fortunately, a father´s friend lent us his house because he moved two years before and he had on sale. It was a big house and we were just two people, but my father accepted because he wouldn´t pay rent. After two years my mom was looking for a house, and she found one that she likes. She bought a small house north of the city and we moved. This house is the place where I live now.
Well done Maria, you are doing very well. I think there are a few things you need to fix. Your work can get better. Keep writing. We will talk about it in class.
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